Revised Post to Peer Reviewers

I finally finished. I think I have a stomach ulcer, but I finished.

So it looks like the questions on this open post are sort of tailored for last week, so I'll try and adapt them.

• Information: I'm nervous. I tried really hard to make this relatable and effective, but there is still a part of me that thinks it just sounds like a bunch of inane ramblings. I know it doesn't, but like, the fear is there. 
• Weaknesses: I just really hope it doesn't come off as aggressive. I usually get pretty aggressive and forceful when I argue, so I adapted my paper to be more relatable and definitely less sarcastic. I do want people to hear me out, after all. 
• Strengths: My conclusion is money af. I finally managed to write a paper where the conclusion doesn't begin with "In conclusion". Kinda sneaks up on you. I like that. 

I really worked hard on this, I just hope it's as good as I think it is. Writing 10 pages about Donald Trump sort of sucks out the soul. Wish me luck... and with that, I press submit. 

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