Wednesday, April 13, 2016

Editorial Report B

Some more things changed. Shocking! Let's learn more.

1. The changes I made to content are as follows

  • Double checked quotes from video sources to make sure I got them right, edited accordingly
  • Added proper in text citations 
  • More detail in the third section 
2. Form didn't change much as a result, it just became a little longer. I think this paragraph is in pretty good shape so I didn't change much. 




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