Peer Review of Jason Boley

Here I'm going to peer review Jason. Here we go.

• Jason Boley- Culture vs. Progress. 
• I made a content suggestion- right now, his paper reads as a research report on all sides of this argument. I suggested that he add more of his opinion throughout, because now it only appears in the very end. 
• I think I helped because adding your own voice is an integral part of this project, it's got to be very opinionated and that's important to know. 
• Student's Guide- my suggestion relates to summary and analysis. I think the paper is too much summary at this point, it needs to be less of a research report and more of an argument.
• I really liked how he included not just two sides of an argument but many sides- environmentalists, indigenous tribes, and freeway teams alike.