Here I'm going to talk about some changes that I made again! Huzzah.
1. So content totally changed because I added a section that wasn't there before. Now I have my introduction, yay! It's obviously better because papers need introductions, duh.
2. Form changed because not only do I now have an introduction, but I broke my last paragraph in half and made part of it my introduction. That way you understand right off the bat why I'm disgusted by Trump and the reader is able to draw parallels from the sociopath that I knew and Trump.
Since this paragraph didn't exist before, I don't have an earlier cut to show you. But here's my introduction, yay!
TADAA
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