Saturday, February 20, 2016

Local Revision: Pronoun Usage

In this post I'll be evaluating my use of pronouns.

1. There isn't as much pronoun usage as I thought there would be, which I think is good. It means my language is more direct. The references I made the most are to the people who took the photo, which is fine, but it makes it look like I spent more time talking about them than I did when I made my list of pronouns. As they aren't the most important part of this story, they are only my highest reference because I used a lot of pronouns in that particular paragraph.

2. I didn't use any pronouns referring to my audience, but that does not mean I didn't refer to them. I talked about them as anyone having an internet connection trying to find out the color of the dress, simply without using any pronouns.

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